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Anonymous
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, January 21, 2004 - 05:33 pm: | 
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Ladies and gentlemen, lets continue.
The scene opens in the dark of the night, we see a closeup of the moon, it's full. The camera pulls back to show us a moon lit parking area adjacent to what appears to be yet another hospital. The camera pans around the dimly lit area. The area is surrounded by trees casting their shadows across the moon lit parking spaces. The scene shifts to the front door of the hospital. The sign above the door reads Crawford Long Hospital. A nurse is seens coming through the doors and we follow her across the lot and into her car. As the car drives away we notice something moving in the shadows of the treeline. The camera switches back to the closeup of the front door of the hospital. We see another nurse depart followed by what appears to be a doctor. They exchange goodnights and are seen walking towards their cars. It's quitting time, second shift at Crawford Long Hospital. Lab technicians, janitors and the such are seen waking towards their cars, some briskly, some in a slow stroll. The scene shifts back to the shadow in the treeline, it's seen peeking out every so often as if looking for someone special. The scene shifts back to the front door and then to the lot, everything is still, it's quite, cars are sparsely spread about. The scene shifts back to the front door, there seems to be no movement everyone had gone home for the night. Then the door open and out steps a whistling Thumper. Thumper liked the second shift, few people were around and when things got slow he would partake in his favorite hobbie, reading. His boss, Zack, whom Thumper believed was hooked on prescription drugs was seldom around, he was off nodding or checking stations to see if a sleeping nurse had forgot to lock her cabinet. Thumper was the supervisor of the lab unite, leaving last, checking on this and that. Thumper's SUV was parked close to the fringe of the parking area. We see Thumper walk from the front door and towards his auto. As Thumper is walking his image gets smaller yet over his shoulder we see the shadows moving. The scene shifts to Thumper reaching in his pockets and pulling out his keys, the shadow moves again this time towards Thumper who has not seen his surprise visitor. The scene is a closeup of Thumpers face, we then hear, "hello Thumper". His eyes widen, he Yells, NO! NO! shots ring out, BAM BAM! Thumper stands motionless then slumps onto his car. The perpetrator is seen running into the darkness. Fade to black
The next scene finds us in a large crowed smoke filled room. The camera pans, showing us a variety of different looking people of all ages and colors. The camera stops on the back of a mans head as he rises and says, "Hello my name is Chris and I'm an addict". The crowd responds with a boisterous, "HELLO CHRIS, WELcome". Chris then preceeds to tell his story, "hello" he says, "I am Chris and I'am an addict, this is", Chris stops and fidgets with his tie, he's nervous, he continues, "this is my first meeting and I'm glad I'm here", we hear applaush coming from the crowd. The camera fades to black.
The next scene finds us at the outside of a restaurant, the sign reads "Smokie Joe's, you can bet your babies "back" on these ribs". The camera follows a path through the front door and towards two people sitting at a far end table. The camera closes in on a women with a perplexed look on her face. The camera zooms out to show the back of her companions head and her face. We can tell it's a man by the cut of his hair. The man speaks, "What's wrong, you look surprised....uncomfortable"? The camera stays on the womens face as she says, "I just thought you would look a little different, a little **pause**, the man breaks in and says questionly, "a little taller, a little darker or maybe even white"? Hesitantly the women answers, no no I just thought that" she stops again, shes obviously nervous, She continues, "well your posts are so rich, so intelligent, so strong", The man replies with a puzzling tone "and what", The women responds with, " Well I didn't expect you to look like **pause** like ERKELL. The music heightens as the camera pans around to a stunned and hurt looking ABM! ABM stands up and loudly says, "Erkell, what the f*%& are you talking about"? The camera switches back to the women that has now taken on a defensive posture as she says, "Sit down, people are looking at you", she continues as ABM begrudginglyly sits down and shuts up. "Look you got them bostonian shoes on, with those big ass glasses and you're still wearing a flat-top, nobody wears a flat-top anymore except **pause** Erkell". ABM rises and without thinking, throws his glass of water in the womens face. The scene fades to black.
The scene is now that of a small doctors office, we see the stirrups of the examination table. Theres a women lying on the table. The camera shifts to the face of a elderly looking nurse as she says, " I have to ask you this one more time, are you sure you want to go through with this"? The camera swings around, we see Cynique as she nervously yet strongly says "yes, lets get this over with". The camera fades to black
The next scene finds us back in the car with Sisgal, whom sometimes uses the username of Writer Girl, whom some think is none other than the mysterous sex partner of ABM, Kola Boof. When we last left Sisgal, she was terrified to find out that the man she had picked up whom she thought to be her creep, Reppskern, was none other than the ruthless killing bank robber, The Gay Studdly Guy! The robber, better known to his friends as "guy", had been robbing banks throughout the midwest, killing indiscriminately any and everyone in his path. Sisgal did not know this but nevertheless was in the throngs of fear having picked up a man she does not know. The scene shifts to the eyes of a frighten looking Sisgal as her eyes dart back and forth between the road and her companion. She was particually focusing on the gun tucked in his waistband. We hear her thinking as she starts to compose herself. We hear, "If I can get my hands on that pistol I'll blow that MotherF*&%rs dick off". The scene shifts to a sweeting Guy as he gives Sisgal Directions, "turn her", he says in a quick mean voice. A confident looking sisgal follows his orders as her eyes again look down at the gun in his waistband as he turns his head in the direction of his orders. Sisgal thought, "this is it, I have to do this now". As the car pulls out of the turn, she reaches with both hands towards the gun. A scuffles ensues, the car is careening out of control, shots are heard, "POP" "POP POP". The car broadsides another and continues on, we hear another "POP POP". The camera fades to black.
Thumpers Corner......THE MOVIE ....Cont, |
ABM
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 03:39 am: |
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Hey Anonymous!
Don't fergit my pocket protector, slide rule, suspenders and my ever-stylish...high-water pants. HAHAHA!!!
But lets not shortchange ol' Steve Urkel, now. 'Cause if I recall my Family Matters trivia, Urkel had a 'scrait' playah-playah alter ego: The suave & debonair "Stefan Arkail".
And the daft Urkel finally did eventually mack the foine & savvy Laura (whom Yours Truly once harbored some very 'illicit' thoughts about).
So, tell my troubled cyber honey to have no fear. Because this is one nerd who...gets his "revenge".
Heh! Heh! Heh! Snort! Heh! Heh! Heh! Snort! |
Anonymous
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 06:38 am: |
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Hello All, the story is a short one today. I thought I'd try something new. a short shot of Thumper's Corner, I hope you like it.
The scene opens with nothing other than the view of Kola Boof looking out over the ocean. Kola has been banned from Thumper's Corner for varied reasons but yet she continues to lurk into....... THUMPER'S CORNER.
We hear the naration over the soft sounds of the violin.
The camera closes in on a penchant looking Kola.
The narration begins:
Contrary to popular belief, Kola Boof was not raised in humble beginnings. She was a child of noble parentage, yet always wanted to be free of the isolation of royalty. Her family line can be traced back to the African tribe, Coromantees who's land lay near the Senegal River, half a continent away from the lands she now calls home. Her parents, Mbwela and fulani Equiano pampered their only daughter, the finest teachers were hired thus Kola's rich education and knowledge is without question inferior to few. She loved reading literature old and new. Nineteenth century Russian storytellers, sixteenth-century English dramatists and contemporary American poets were but a few of her favorites. She took pleasure and understanding from literature, she learned how to read it. Kola is often heard saying that much of the writing in newspapers, magazines, and popular novels is not literature. She's been known to say reading material of that nature is like watching most television or eating fast food, they are not nourishment to the mind or body. She often wondered how people could survive without reading, without having the proper tools by which one observes, measures and judges the people around them and understand the actions and motives of others and of themselves. She is a critical thinker. Kola believes that anyone that does not read and shuts from their lives everything except food and shelter, parts of them starves to death. Through her reading Kola longed for america, the land of the free, the home of the brave. But her arrival here was meet with darnished dreams. In trying to blend into the american way she had to recreate herself and in doing so lost some of who she truly is. Even her fans that adore her are trappings, she's had to live this life as a caricature. but yet she lives, she lives partly by the good fortune of 2 men, Troy and ABM, her secret lovers and the fathers of her children. The music lowers we Fade to Black |
ABM
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 09:46 am: |
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Blame this on Anonymous!
Hey Troy!
I got 1st-dibbs on Kola through March. 'Cause nuthin' can break the winter chill like a lil' Kola snuggling.
You can have 'ups' during the spring.
And dude. REALLY! I don't mind sharing. After all, the immortal Snoop Doggy Dog advised, "Eh ain't no FUNNNNN, if dah homies can't HAAAAVE NUN!"
But you gottah remember one thing: When yu are dun...PUULEEESE!...take yur tacky crotchless pink Speedo’s wit' chu! |
StopdaPresses
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 10:52 am: |
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Wow. I bet this oughta bring Garbo (I mean "Kola") out of the woodwork. I bet she'll be reading this board now.
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