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Mskeneshie
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Username: Mskeneshie

Post Number: 1
Registered: 01-2005

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Posted on Friday, January 28, 2005 - 12:55 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

his love continues to escape me
and i run wild
with puffy eyes
trying to get him to see
my point
my devotion
my side
my willingness
to divide and conquer
the will and the right
to call him
my man

his love continues to escape me
and i bend over
forwards and backwards
in the greatest attempt
to secure his feelings
to determine
our love
our life
our hate
which not to debate
because for him i give
devotion

his love continues to escape me
and get my net
of any kind
fish
butterfly
Cleopatra Jones
to entice and invite
him to see the
opportunity my love
can allow him
the chance

i am scared
yet i am prepared
because i dare
to open the carcass
of my heart to feel
and of my lungs to breathe
in deep
the stench of him

his love continues to escape
and my God
and my life
determines if I can
even extend myself
without boundaries
to bring me to reality

not for some show
not for some blow
not for some attempt of some
signs hidden below the surface
but for the love of this man
to stop hiding
to stop disguising
to start abiding
and stop advising
himself with the anecdotes
that keep him away
his love still continues to
evade me
yet invade me
and i’m at odds
with myself
i’m at odds
with the depth
of this circle
in which i continue
to walk

i balk at my own attempts
to catch this love
but i still try
and i won’t lie
i’m getting tired
of this escaping love
but i still want
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Cuba_va
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Username: Cuba_va

Post Number: 20
Registered: 10-2004

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Posted on Sunday, April 17, 2005 - 10:38 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

baby they have not responded to this poem because they know not true love ints its essence. I feel u. keep blessing the world with your gifts. and i hope u continue to love and allow love. one...
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Mskeneshie
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Username: Mskeneshie

Post Number: 2
Registered: 01-2005

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Posted on Tuesday, April 11, 2006 - 03:51 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Thank you cuba va for sharing. of course this message comes almost a year behind your response but i gave up getting any feedback here.

Peace and God bless.

Mskeneshie

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