| Author | Message | ||
     Mskeneshie Newbie Poster Username: Mskeneshie Post Number: 4 Registered: 01-2005 Rating: N/A |
i am afraid...of this bed i made and the power that it draws from me is relentless see i repent of this selfless attitude i possess becaused i'm blessed i'm afraid...of this mess that i made and the unsure ways for which i seek a lazy haze and i jump right in with a constructive yet intimidating gaze see i repent of this selfless attitude that i possess because i'm blessed i am afraid...of this martyr's hand that i played of the bed in which this hand was displayed i need to hide my wares for all can see my attitude very well the nervous twitch in my walk the smell of fear on my breathe when i talk i didn't mean to take it this far i am afraid...of this bed that i made because it's hard to get him out of there now i worry because i know he can smell my fear of being alone but alone is not what makes me alone it's the unassuming stance that i take on i am afraid...of this bed i made but maybe just maybe i need to change the sheets | ||
| Sisg "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Sisg Post Number: 254 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Wonderful and thought provoking! | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 4311 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I agree. | ||
| Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall Post Number: 89 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I find it irresistable to disagree with Cynique, but that could be a symptom of being a sycophantic follower... oh well...I still agree. | ||
| Always_lurking Regular Poster Username: Always_lurking Post Number: 40 Registered: 02-2004 Rating: N/A |
Loved it, especially the end. |
