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Brotha2thanight Newbie Poster Username: Brotha2thanight
Post Number: 6 Registered: 12-2005
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | Posted on Tuesday, March 28, 2006 - 01:46 am: |
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Fuck YOU!! No, better yet... why dont....You...fuck..me ?!? if I can be so bold see Imma control freak and so for tonight..Shhhhh and just do as your told. Now, close your eyes and imagine my... soul between your thighs..as I hit that G-spot, that Ohhh weee spot, that "dont stoppp sp sp spot" see me nose smells your vapors and my tongue it savors your flavors as it lubes the lock that opens the door to your downstairs neighbor... Oh I know why you shivering see and why your thighs, they wont stop jiggle'in its be cuz the tongue in my mouth is sooooo gooood...uhmmmm uhmm uhmmmmmm somtimes that little fucker starts tickling me At first glance Im not as I appear so listen closely to this speaker see the attention I give your body just scrathes the surface, but the attention i give your mind...now thats what makes you pull me IN deeper and deeper and deeper cuz the deeper the concentration the better the sensation that causes those rapid palpatations which allow me to pre...ejaculate...your mind thru mental masterbation know I know you cant reach out and feel me but thru my words...CAn YoU feEl Me!!!! |
Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique
Post Number: 4252 Registered: 01-2004
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | Posted on Tuesday, March 28, 2006 - 12:09 pm: |
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Yessssssssssssss! Me likee. |
Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall
Post Number: 80 Registered: 01-2004
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | Posted on Thursday, March 30, 2006 - 02:28 pm: |
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Interesting...yes, very interesting. And the moniker of Brotha2thanight...my boy Regie has influenced you or you just love the Love Jones?
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Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique
Post Number: 4266 Registered: 01-2004
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | Posted on Thursday, March 30, 2006 - 04:32 pm: |
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This romantic rap has that organic essence that makes its words come alive as Brotha2thanight delivers on his promise to pentrate the psyche as well as the libido. |
Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall
Post Number: 83 Registered: 01-2004
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | Posted on Friday, March 31, 2006 - 09:25 am: |
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Cynique, I'm loving you like crucial. Thanks for your comments. |
Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique
Post Number: 4267 Registered: 01-2004
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | Posted on Friday, March 31, 2006 - 06:30 pm: |
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Smooches to ya, Rondall. You know, every once in a while I have to remind myself how much I like poetry, especially when as on this site, it serves as a diversion from contentious prose. LOL. Anyhoo, when a poem speaks to me, I spontaneously express my appreciation of it. BTW, after checking out your other thread I came to the conclusion that, to me, poetry as protest is ingenious, but poetry as politics is awkward. |