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"Please fasten your seat belts...we are now preparing to land in Apple Valley, Pennsylvania, Population 220,000."

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YUKIO fastens his seat belt and looks at his watch.


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His Rollodex says 2 pm.

He figures that the woman he left behind--Nurse Sisgal--is over at the Hospital around this time, charting and doing meds.

Stressfully, he puts his head back in a deep sigh, closing his eyes and reconfiguring her face in his mind....not that he'd like to, but...

THERE SHE IS.

The former MISS APPLE VALLEY 2001.
Church girl...Nurse.

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He gulps hard thinking about her.

"Sisgal, Sisgal...Sisgal. How could I hurt you and betray you the way I did after you were so good to me."

YUKIO squints, as though trying to force her beautiful face from his mind, and then because he LOATHES people who are "WEAK" to other people, he hisses, silently: "Stupid BITCH".

YES, he thinks. THAT'S how I could do it. Because you were stupid----and stupid women deserve to get hurt.

STEWARDESS: "Last call for seat belts. We are now landing in Apple, Valley, Pennsylvania. The weather today is calm and chilly."

YUKIO's belly fills with butterflies as the plane starts to descend--because the one thing he never expected to do was RETURN to the town where he lost his soul.



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YUKIO: "I'm back, Apple Valley. I'm back."



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MEANWHILE.....


The Carey Unique Family Mansion on KNOBB HILL.



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Mama Linda...the Head Maid for 40 Years....has ordered that all the MAID staff gather in her presence as they prepare for a major family event....

....the 21st Birthday Celebration of Carey Unique's youngest daughter...A_Womon Unique.

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"I SAID...GIT YALL ASSES IN HERE!!!!", shouts Mama Linda.

"It's inspection time!!!!"

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Because Mama Linda didn't wear her glasses.....she has trouble focusing at first.

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"Is everybody here? I can hardly see yall white asses."

OF COURSE...the person that Mama Linda is looking for, in particular, is the PERSONAL MAID to Mr. Carey's wife, CYNIQUE.

MAID FERGIE.

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FERGIE: "If it's me you're looking for, Miss Linda--I'm right here and accounted for. But you'd better make this quick, because I have to be at Madame Cynique's side every moment...I AM her personal house maid after all...every since you fucked up the back of her neck with that straight'n comb."

MAMA LINDA: "I don't give a damn what position you hold, Fergie. I am still the HEAD MAID of this entire estate and when I call my staff for a meeting...that means your white, wrinkled ass comes running JESS like the rest of the help. Now where is QUINCY the butler!!???--I can't see a thing."

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QUINCY the Butler: "Presented and accounted for, Mama Linda."

MAMA LINDA: "GOOOD. And where is my chefs?"

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Head Cook: "We're all here, Mama Linda. Ready to get the party on the road."

MAMA LINDA: "Good, good. Because this is a very special event....the 21st birthday of Miss A_Womon Unique. She done growed her fasss tail on up and I wont this shin-dig done right----Cuz errrybody in Apple Valley KNOWS that don't nobody throw a party like Mama Linda do. So fuck up my reputation, because I will put your asses out of here."

MAMA LINDA cuts her eyes at FERGIE.

"And let there be NO MISTAKE about who is the boss up in this motherfucker."

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MAMA LINDA walks over and lifts a glass of champagne.

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She raises her fat black hand in a toast: "LET THE BALL BEGIN!"








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THE home STUDY of former baseball star and multi-millionaire.....Carey Unique.



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HE's not much for looks, or a HERO out of books....but he's

one of the richest black men in America.

The CEO and President of the UNIQUE PENN CORPORATION.

The loving husband of Cynique and the father of three brilliant children.

THE PATRIARCH and KING OF THE MANOR BORN..........









MR. CAREY UNIQUE









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"I know...I know. A lot of people who remember me from my baseball glory days don't remember me looking this way.....BUT......that's what running a major corporation will do for you. As you can see...I've mellowed out and come down to earth with the normal folks."

"And boy Oh boy does being married to one hell of a wild woman take a lot out of a man", CAREY laughs, merrily. "BUT...I'm happy."

Like it was yesterday, CAREY can remember the first time that he and CYNIQUE danced:



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HE LAUGHS...because now all of a sudden, their baby daughter A_WOMON is turning all of 21.

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CAREY: "Yes, I cannot complain. Gorgeous redbone wife, undeniable position as one of the richest black men in America...AND....the father of three brilliant children as well."

This is my son, TROY...(Carey shakes his head)



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TROY is basically a good kid....he's just always been ashamed of being a rich boy from the estates---especially since he was always the ONLY rich black boy on KNOBB Hill.

He holds that against me and wishes he was a Pimp's son from the ghetto----but,hey------fuck 'em.

It's really my two daughters that I love anyway.

KABRINA is my eldest child, my favorite child.



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She can't sing but she's a singer, mainly because I'm so rich that she doesn't have to work. Her only downfall is that she's interested in all that Feminism crap.

We fight about it all the time, because she claims that she's never going to get married and never going to lose her virginity....because that's her statement as a feminist.

Yeah, right.

I fault myself, to be honest with you, for letting her hang around that KOLA BOOF broad that I had running my book publishing division.

But anyway.....what KABRINA doesn't know is that I've written it in my WILL that in order for anyone in this family to get their inheritance....SHE has to get married and lose her virginity. So that takes care of that bullshit right there.

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Then there's A_Womon----my baby girl who's turning 21 day.

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She looks like what Cynique looked like when I first fell in love with her.

Tall, redbone, total trophy quality for the NEGRO community.

She's cool. She's a SNOB like her mother.

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And then....there's the CANCER.



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Brain Cancer...colon cancer....lung cancer...testicular cancer on my balls

(CAREY shakes his head)

Dr. Chris Hayden says that my body is riddled with ALL of it...and that there's nothing they can do.

I'm a goner for sure.

It's only a matter of time before they've got me hooked up to machines and laying SUPINE each and every day of my life.

Until the various cancers just eat me alive.

BUT...no way. I'm not a punk like that.

I'm a BLACK KING....a BLACK SUPER HERO of reality, you dig...

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And that's why I've chosen THIS WEEK....as the moment of truth.

I am not going to take this cancer thing lying down.

I'm not going to take it...AT ALL.




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Kabrina Unique's Bedroom:

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KNOCK-KNOCK

KNOCK--KNOCK


KABRINA looks up...she's almost dressed.


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KABRINA: "Come in!"

It's her sister, A_WOMON.

KABRINA: "Well hello there, birthday girl. Wait a minute---don't you know that MAMA LINDA is going to kill you? You should be dressed for the party by now."

A_WOMON: "I have plenty of time to dress for the party....but I need to talk to you.....it's about daddy."

KABRINA: "Daddy?"

A_WOMON: "Yes, KABRINA...I've been having very bad vibes, bad dreams that something is really wrong with him and he's not telling us about it."



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KABRINA: "Uh-Oh. You're flashing those dangerous green eyes again. What's the 411, girl?"

A_WOMON: (Rolls her eyes) "KABRINA---do you have to use that low class ghetto language? I mean really...our last name is UNIQUE. We have a standard to live up to, and besides, you sound like a white girl trying to talk black."

KABRINA: "Ok, look...I'm not about to fight with you today, A_WOMON. What did you come here to say?"

A_WOMON sighs.

Then she looks KABRINA in the eye before telling her what's on her mind.
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A_WOMON sighs again.

A_WOMON: "OK, I don't want you to be mad at me....but I think you really have to reconsider this whole thing you have about never losing your virginity and never getting married. KABRINA, it really bothers father."

KABRINA: "Well that's too bad, A_Womon....because it's my life and it's my decision. Every woman should find her purpose in life and what she stands for. I've decided that I don't respect the male species....I don't HATE them, but I don't respect how they've maligned and mistreated women, and for that reason, I'd rather just avoid them altogether."

A_WOMON: "You have been BRAINWASHED, Kabrina!! By that atrocious Kola Boof woman that daddy hired to run his publishing division. Thank God she's gone back to Africa!"

KABRINA: "No, A_Womon, actually this has nothing to do with Kola, although I really did respect her opinions and her strength. But I've come to my conclusions on my own."

A_WOMON: "And what ABM...the stable boy?"

KABRINA: "What about him?"

A_WOMON: "Everybody knows that he's crazy about you....he even stopped horsing around with that dreadful Kola Boof and started putting all his attention on you."

KABRINA: "I see ABM like a brother, A_WOMON. I mean after all....Mama Linda raised her 3 sons in the Back House on this estate. We've grown up almost like sisters and brothers. It's almost incestuous for me to think of him like that."

A_WOMON: "No, it's not incestuous, KABRINA....but it is LOW CLASS, being that their mother is a maid and they have no proper name in society. Still--I'd rather see you swept off your feet by a low class stable boy than breaking father's heart the way you're doing."

KABRINA: "I am going to DIE a virgin, A_Womon....unmarried. And that's the way I want it. Now come along....let's get ready for your birthday party."

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Cynique's Roll Royce arrives back from shopping for a gown for the party.

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After going upstairs to the master suite....Cynique Unique presses a button on her cell phone and calls for her personal MAID.

"Fergie!! Fergie!! I'm back from the boutique. Are you ready to get me dressed?"



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"Coming Madame Unique...Coming just as fast as I can. That dreadful Mama Linda had us all in a meeting."

CYNIQUE rolls her eyes.

CYNIQUE: "God how I hate that nappyheaded black bitch. If Carey wasn't so loyal to her---because they come from the same little backwards country town---I'd kick her AND her three sons out of my Back House. The bitch burned my neck when she was hot-combing my hair and tried to pretend it was an accident!!! Accident my ass....I had burnt marks on my ears, on my neck...my hair was singed!"

CYNIQUE steps in front of the mirror.

"Boy do I look plain without my makeup and hair done."

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FERGIE: "Well, Madame, we shall take care of that right away."

CYNIQUE: "Did you get my jewels polished up?"

FERGIE: "Of course, Madame. They're all ready."

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CYNIQUE: "Good. And what about my husband's business calls...."

FERGIE turns white as a ghost from fear.

CYNIQUE laughs. "Why, Fergie...you're not answering me, darling. I specifically instructed you to listen in on my husband's business calls. Especially the ones between him and his lawyer, Lawchic."

FERGIE: (Nervously) "Yes, Mam...I did listen."

CYNIQUE: "WEEEEELLLLL!"

FERGIE: "Well, Madame...I just...I feel so bad about violating other people's privacy."

CYNIQUE: "Fergie, you're a MAID! You're supposed to violate other people's privacy. Now look here...I want to hear everything. WHat is going on???"

FERGIE: "Well....it's far worse than you even thought, Madame Cynique."

CYNIQUE: "What? He's leaving me for his secretary or something?"

FERGIE: "No...no, nothing like that. It's...uh...it's something else that I heard. Not between Master Carey and his lawyer...but between him and his doctor, Chris Hayden."

CYNIQUE almost shits on herself....because only two weeks ago....she was in a motel being literally beast-fucked by Dr. Chris Hayden!!!

Now...her mouth hangs open.

But Fergie has other news.



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FERGIE: "Your husband is dying, Madame Cynqiue....he has colon cancer, testicular cancer, lung cancer and Brain cancer---there isn't any hope."

CYNIQUE is so shocked...she can't speak!!!!

FERGIE: "He's planning to kill himself...so that he won't have to suffer the seizures attacking his brain....and that's why he's been meeting with Lawchic to make a final will and testament."

CYNIQUE: "My husband has cancer and he's planning to kill himself?"

FERGIE: "Yes, madame. And he's leaving you everything."

CYNIQUE: "And he's leaving me......everything?"

FERGIE: "YES, madame...everything. Now there....your makeup and hair are done."

FERGIE switches on the table light and turns CYNIQUE around to the mirror so that she can see herself.

FERGIE: "You look ravishing, Madame. All ready to see your little girl turn 21."


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CYNIQUE: "Yes, but I have much weightier things on my mind now, Fergie....like....how long will it be before my poor husband kills himself?"

FERGIE whispers passionately: "There's still time, Madame! Still time to save him."

CYNIQUE: "Save him?"

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TROY UNIQUE is pulling up to the mansion just in time for his sister's birthday party.

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Just before he's to hop out....there's a call on his cell phone.

Troy clicks on: "Yo...diss Troy."

GOLDIE: "Hello, Troy....it's Goldie. I just wanted you to know that I made you $560 so far today."

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TROY: "Hey, my Nubian Snow Queen---Cool. You know I like it when a female sells her ass for me. It proves she's down with a brother."

GOLDIE: "Well I most certainly am down with being one of your HO's and I'm getting lip injections and butt implants next week, too. So that will just shut up that Jamaican girl you got who made fun of me being white."

TROY: "Look...it's all good, OK. You just keep selling your ass for Daddy Troy and sucking dick to keep my car notes paid. It's you and me against the world babe, you and me against the haters. We got a special taboo thang. There ain't no race but the human race!"

GOLDIE: "You and Dr. King ain't never lied, TROY!"

Just then, there's another call coming in on Troy's cell phone.

He switches over.

TROY: "Yo...diss Troy."

Cocoa: "TROY...it's Cocoa."

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TROY: "How you doi'n girl, you sell'n that ass for daddy?"

Cocoa: "Yeah. I just wanted to tell you how excited I am to be the woman of a real live Rastafarian brother. I finally got me a man."

TROY: "That's right, sweetie, I'm all yours. You just keep mak'n daddy some money with that ass, brown sugar princess."

Cocoa: "You love me Troy?"

TROY: "You know I do. I'm like SNOOP. Got a G-nigga Jones fa you."

Cocoa: "Uhm...tell your sister I said happy birthday."

TROY: "Aight and you just sell dat ass for daddy."
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TROY GETS OUT OF HIS CAR...and enters through Cynique's wing of the UNIQUE mansion.


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Mama Linda comes at him.

"Boy, whurr have you been!? You 'posed to been here 2 hours ago!"



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TROY comes down the hall just as the party is starting for his sister........

Everyone is singing...

"Happy birthday to you....Happy birthday to you...."


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TROY smiles at his beautiful sister. And Carey and Cynique are so happy to see all their children gathered together.

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Happy birthday our beautiful daughter!!!!!

From Mommy and Daddy.....

Happy 21st birthday!!


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MEANWHILE....

at APPLE VALLEY MEMORIAL HOSPITAL

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Nurse Bianca is excited to tell Nurse Sisgal some exciting news.

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"Sisgal....Sisgal....."

Nurse Sisgal: "Oh hey, Bianca---what's up?"

BIANCA: "Haven't you heard yet?"

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Sisgal: "Heard what?"

BIANCA: "My brother is back in town....YUKIO...he's back to see you."

SISGAL is stunned to silence.

She doesn't know what to say...or how to feel.

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Mayor Emanuel Carpenter---the Mayor of Apple Valley----finds an interesting box sitting in his living room.



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Mayor Emmanuel Carpenter: "WHAT IS THIS?"

He finds that there's a letter with it.

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Just as he begins to read it....LAWCHIC runs in screaming!!!

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LAWCHIC: "Emmanuel nooooo!!!! Put that down!!!!"

Emmanuel is startled and drops the letter.

LAWCHIC looks as though she's about to have a heart attack.

She tells him: "No one must ever read this letter...."

She takes it from him and stuffs it into the GOLDEN treasure chest.

Emmanuel: "Well, wow...that's pretty dramatic, lawyer love. What's up?"

LAWCHIC: "This is Carey Unique's treasure box...his will and testament is in here....and also....a letter to his daughter, A_WOMON. A letter that he doesn't ever want her to read, because if she read it....Carey truly believes that she might kill someone--murder someone."

Lawchic locks the box.

Lawchic: "It must all stay right here. Right here where no one will ever know what's inside. As a lawyer under oath...I have to protect my client's wishes.....and I'm telling you, Emmanuel...what's in this box could rip this entire town apart."

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RIGHT in the middle of the birthday party for A_WOMON......one of Mama Linda's sons appears.

It's her second oldest son, SOLOMON BONES. A_WOMON is shocked to see him.





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SOLOMON: "Happy birthday, A_WOMON....you're 21 now."

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Nervously, she tries to act casual. But she can't act casual.

FLASHBACK:


2 years ago.

The Unique Family Pool and Lake.

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A_WOMON had been swimming that day....and he had come down to the lake and jumped in to tease her...and splash her.

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A_WOMON: "Nobody invited you to get in the lake with me. Your last name isn't even Unique. You're the maid's son!"

SOLOMON laughed and splashed water in her face.

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He said: "I'd like to see you kick a big ol 6'4 black man out of this lake--and you can save the rich brat routine--we practically grew up together on this estate. I've swam in this lake with you thousands of times."

A_Womon: "Yeah--but you've never seem me naked."

SOLOMON smirked. "So you're naked now?"

A_WOMON: "As the day I was born."

And he had began chasing her in the water....and she had laughed screaming and flailed her arms and legs to swim and dash away from him.

But somehow....someway....as though they'd both been caught up in summer fever...they found themselves later that night...LITERALLY in a fever.

SOLOMON had waited til night....and then snuck in her bedroom window.

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She was sleeping when he came in....and he went over to her bed.

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Gently...he had nudged her,

his hand going over her mouth to stop her from screaming once she'd been frightened out of her sleep.

SOLOMON: (Whispering in the dark) "It's me...Solomon. Don't scream."

And then he had taken his hand away from her mouth...and gently rested it on her collarbone.

He had kissed her ear and neck....then her lips, tenderly.

Flushed with fever, A_WOMON had told him: "I'm still a virgin."

And then when he kissed her....she had put her hand against his chest, as though to block him from her own desires.

But the night held them like a seance.

Slowly, poetically, rapturously...

they were rubbing, their hot skin touching, their tongues dipping and teasing and tasting.

AND THEN....A_WOMON had felt it go up in her. His dick.

"Ouh-hhhhhhhhhhhh", she gasped with surprise. Her brow hot and her eyes watering.

"It's too big, Solomon--it's too big."

But he kissed her into silence and mussed her and pumped inside her, first gently and then galloping.

He fucked her like she was a piece of silk trying to be a hamock.

Fucked her and fucked her.


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And now....here they were at her 21st birthday party.



AND A_WOMON hated the sight of him!!!

She felt ashamed and dirty just to look at him----and what nerve, he actually brought his new girlfriend--that riff raff Nurse from the hospital--BIANCA MORENO with him.

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BIANCA: "Happy birthday, Ms. Unique."

A_WOMON: "Uhnhu."

And she sauntered away from the two of them.

Madder than a scorpion on its period.

KABRINA came up to her.


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"Hey sis, what's wrong?"

A_WOMON smiled. "Oh nothing. Nothing at all."

KABRINA: "Well...I was just thinking about what you said to me earlier---and I thought I'd tease YOU."

A_WOMON: "Tease me?"

KABRINA: "Yes. Now that you're 21---when are YOU going to lose YOUR virginity????"

And Kabrina laughed and laughed, as though she just KNEW that her younger sister was still a virgin.

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KABRINA stopped laughing. "OK...like, uhm...you're not laughing."

A_WOMON: (flustered) "Well, that's because I'm not even ready to THINK about losing my virginity. I was only pressuring YOU, because you swore that you will never lose yours. There's a big difference--now excuse me, Kabrina."


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Lawchic took the golden chest to her safe.

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She locked it inside and then began to cry.

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She was sorry for Carey Unique.

So very sorry for him.

But more than that---she feared for his daughter.

The one called

A_WOMON.

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Just then Cynique Unique went up to Mama Linda.

CYNIQUE: "Have you seen my husband? I can't seem to find him anywhere?"

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MAMA LINDA: "Last I saw him...he had a bottle of Vodka and was headed out the back door." She turned her back to Cynique then and mumbled, "Some women drives a man that way."

And Cynqiue thought to herself---"You just WAIT til my husband's dead, you crusty old buzzard. Your ass is OUTTA here!!!"

And Mama Linda looked at her and smiled......a secret smile.

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One that said: "No....YOU just wait."

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When Nurse Sisgal got home----YUKIO was there, just as she expected.

She opened the door to her house and allowed him to come in off the porch.

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At first, they said nothing. But then he finally broke the ice.


YUKIO: "Hello."

Sisgal nodded to him--sticking her hand deep inside her pocket.

YUKIO: "I told my sister to tell you that I was back in town...just to gage your reaction. She said you were shocked, but not outraged."

Sisgal clutched at the gun.

She clutched at the gun. Sweat beading on her forehead suddenly.

She thought to herself...."If this motherfucker dares to even utter the words ''I LOVE YOU'' one time..he's DEAD".

YUKIO: "Sisgal?"

Sisgal: "I'm listening."

He sighed heavily.

YUKIO: "I just came back to tell you....what an asshole I've been and how I don't deserve a woman like you."

Sisgal: "You got that right."

YUKIO: "I'm so....so sorry about the abortion."

Sisgal: "Yeah--that's what they always say."

YUKIO: "I just...I thought..."

AND THEN....he fucked up.

He pulled out a felt black box and flipped it open to reveal an engagement ring.

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He said to her: "Will you marry me?"

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Something in Sisgal....snapped.

WILL YOU MARRY ME?

YUKIO asked....right before the shooting started.

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The Unique Penn Corporation Headquarters

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This is where Carey Unique snuck off to.

His offices in his Corporate building.

He wanted to get drunk off his vodka and try to build himself up for the big day--when he would kill himself.

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WEARILY....he began to think of all the times he had cheated on CYNIQUE.

Times over the years....with this skanky MAID or that skanky MAID.

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And then also....his employee, Kola Boof.

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THAT BITCH!

She had ran off and left him to run his publishing division by himself....all because her "integrity" got in the way of his money making expertise.

She wanted to publish REAL literature---and Carey had wanted books that sold. Good trash escapism like this soap opera.

The thing that bothered him though were the RUMORS about Kola.

RUMORS that she had been pregnant when she left.

DRUNK...and upset, he decided to telephone in AFRICA.

CAREY: "Operator!!!"


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OPERATOR: "Yes, Operator here."

CAREY: "I'd like to make a transatlantic call! Volta Nile, Africa---778-4455."

OPERATOR: "Connecting."

KOLA BOOF: "Ha-llo."



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CAREY: "KOLA....Kola, it's me, Carey Unique. LISTEN...I'm in the process of making out my will and I want you to give it to me and I want you to give it to me straight, you African bitch.....are you PREGNANT?"

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KOLA: "Don't ask me that, you sexist pig Black American niggerstock, you! I can take care of myself. And just for the record---I know you're planning to kill yourself. I have spies in your house who tell me everuh-tang!"

CAREY: "Now you listen here, Kola....don't you tell a single soul about me planning to take my life. It's nobody's business. I'm dying and there's nothing that can be done."

KOLA: "But dass not true, Carey. There IS something that can be done. Trust me. I know how to cure you."

CAREY: "YOU...know how to cure me?"

KOLA: "Yes, I believe I can. If you'll just hold on and wait. I am talking to very powerful men right now. Jujuno fathers. They can save you--but you must be of a strong mind. You mustn't take your own life. It's wrong, Carey, and it's not what God wants for you."

___________________

ON A SPLIT LINE INSIDE CYNIQUE'S BEDROOM in the Unique mansion....she can hear everything as she listens in.

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Cynique listens in horror as KOLA talks Carey out of committing suicide.

Cynique begins to CRY!! as she realizes all the millions and all the power that she will have to WAIT....and WAIT for....if Carey doesn't do what he was planning to do.

KOLA says: "Promise me, Carey--that you won't do it. Please wait until I can get the Jujuno men to see you. You must come to Africa...to be healed, Carey."

CAREY: "I promise...I promise, Kola. I won't do it. I'll start making arrangements right away to fly over to Volta Nile."

KOLA: "Good, daddy. I'll be waiting for you. I always wait on you."



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UPSET....Crying and fatigued by the party and all the news she's heard in one day....

CYNIQUE cries and cries that night.

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EVENTUALLY.....she falls

into a very DEEP sleep.

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Carey never comes home that night.....and CYNIQUE falls into a deep, dark sleep.

So deep and dark....that the spirit of her dead mother comes to her.

She opens her eyes...and it's HER....her grand old mother from down Arkansas Way....


"OLD YELLER"




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"Mama? Is that you, Mama?"

"Why it sure is, Cynique--OLD YELLER. And I come to wipe your tears away, darl'n.....because you have WORK to do. You have got to get that man's money--after all you've been through, sticking by him as he cheated and philandered....did his dirt and still wiped his leaky dick off on you, too. You deserve everything he's got!"

"I know it, mama. I know I DO!"

"This is no time for cheap sentiment, Cynique. You must let your true spirit prevail. You cannot afford to let this Kola Boof Goof rain on your parade. She is pregnant with Carey's baby as we speak!"

CYNIQUE BOLTED UPRIGHT....OUT OF HER SLEEP.

Her mouth hung open wide with shock.

She clutched her heart and exclaimed, "Oh my god!"

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NEXT.....

on KEEPERS OF THE FLAME


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BIANCA tells Sisgal: "YUKIO's condition is stable now--he's going to live! He told the police everything, Sisgal!! How you two were just talking when a prowler broke in and shot him."

"Sisgal? Sisgal?"

_______________________

"What's your name?"

"I'm MOON-RIND....I'm writing a book about Apple Valley."

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_________________________________

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"YES...this is Cynique Unique."

"Mrs. Unique...we have news about your husband."

______________________

KABRINA finds herself down at the stables....talking to ABM

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BUT MAMA LINDA makes a startling announcement:

MAMA LINDA: "I don't want my sons marrying no black girls!! I want White, Mexican--a Japanese bitch, but I done told yall boys not to bring home no damn nappyheaded black gals!!!"

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