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     Brotha2thanight First Time Poster Username: Brotha2thanight Post Number: 1 Registered: 12-2005 Rating: |
My prayers to god dont get answered in time but I guess thats his will See inside my heart theres a cavity that miracles, good times and my mothers smiles were supposed to fill Laced fingers, a bowed head and the knee prints worn into the rug next to my bed seem to serve no purpose no more subconscious messages lord...right now I just need you to surface my prayers feel worthless...... I feel I could gather 3 people right now!! and say a prayer in your name we could all ask for simple shit and it would all be in vain, cuz nothing would change God, is a just God.. fair in every way?.. just saying it kinda makes me confused see how can you explain to a parent that its only fair that their child was raped, killed, abandoned or abused Love..love is the breath of God (I love the thought of that) and sometimes I slowly die of asphyxiation so Jesus Christ...when you get a chance will you come down and do some CPR on my situation As believers, we can make miracles out of anything, whenever the feeling hits ya like you could say its a miracle that your leg is connected to your hip or that your fingers have a tip or that you found shoes that fit ya BUT PEOPLE WITHOUT FAITH GET THAT....Shit I want some stronger stuff DONT YOU!!! Like, I wanna wake up to all bills paid for the month and be able to use my check on something else or be able to say "In Jesus name" & cure my headaches or quote a verse from the bible & cure Grandpa's health........................ God, You! Made! Me! so You know, You-Gave-Me! this questioning soul you knew I would think the story about Jonah in the whale and the talking talking donkey were outta control Un-BeLiEvE-aBlE but i try to have faith... and I know Im being tested but it would be easier if I could just get 1 question answered like,.. are the blessed the ones that simply.... believe... ignoring rhyme and reason? and If so, then Father take away all my thoughts and subliminal conversations and say "go forth and see what I see son" sometimes I think thoughts that maybe my mouth shouldn't say and I usually call my mom when I start feeling that-away and she in her loving sarcastic way just tells me to pray i cant remember what lead to it but I remember telling her that I'd never seen the devil one day and she giggled and said "well baby, paths never cross when your going the same way" well we laughed a bit and I got some verses to read and hung up feeling fine and now I think maybe its true what the ol'folks say Maybe God dont come when you call... but he's always on time ~virgin to the board | ||
| Jackie Veteran Poster Username: Jackie Post Number: 51 Registered: 04-2005 Rating: N/A |
What a flow ! Bravo !! Brav fucking O ! I would love to hear this performed.. | ||
| Brotha2thanight Newbie Poster Username: Brotha2thanight Post Number: 2 Registered: 12-2005 Rating: N/A |
Thanks Jackie !!!! I didn't think anyone would read my stuff, since Im the new guy and extremely unknown. I do open mic so I am very cautious about having my stuff read by others. Thanks for vote of confidence. | ||
| Jackie Veteran Poster Username: Jackie Post Number: 53 Registered: 04-2005 Rating: N/A |
Hi Again, I don't discriminate. Good luck where ever you perform it. I'm diggin this one. | ||
| Sisg "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Sisg Post Number: 231 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I second Jackie! EXCELLENT! | ||
| Brotha2thanight Newbie Poster Username: Brotha2thanight Post Number: 3 Registered: 12-2005 Rating: N/A |
Thanks Sisg. you guys really have made me feel welcome. | ||
| Kola_boof "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Kola_boof Post Number: 1006 Registered: 02-2005 Rating: N/A |
I just had time to read this. It's brilliant! | ||
| Tonya "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Tonya Post Number: 1154 Registered: 07-2005 Rating: N/A |
***What a flow ! Bravo !! Brav fucking O !*** LOL, Jackie!!! Too funny! Very Nice, Brotha2thanight! Witty.. Clever.. Nice! Tonya | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 3195 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
What a good command of language and wit and rhythm, you have, Brotha. Thanks for providing the board with a diverting change of pace. | ||
| Brotha2thanight Newbie Poster Username: Brotha2thanight Post Number: 5 Registered: 12-2005 Rating: N/A |
thank you, to all of you. I really never thought that anyone would really get what I write without me saying it. I really lack confidence in my writting skill so I usually never let people see it. ~you guys have really lifted a burden for me. |
