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Beautifulwaterstar wrote this piece. She is haing trouble registering. Please contact troy@aalbc.com if you are having issues registering to post on the discussion board. Let your voice be heard and seen!

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"Iz U Feelin' My Abstract"("The Art of Feeling The Untouchable")Beautifulwaterstar

Static, the static, the static
Congregating in the heights of my crown
Erecting a gate
That goes up with every let down
It goes down for nothing
It just stands there, so solid yet still intangible, yes
But though invisible, it is something the wise refuse to test.
They simply know better...
The first learned letter
Has been engraved in my heart and has caused the repricussions to tear me apart
Simulatenously still, my will refuses to let me be broken
For my existence is but a circle, yes
It remains unbroken
It remains unbroken
It remains unbroken
Mantras reaffirming the essence of my truth
Striking a stagnant nerve... The silence reverberates, protesting the thought of it all
Slowly but surely,
The silence becomes so very loud
It is beyond excruciating to the soul
Pained pride proceeds
Slyly soliciting silent screams
Screaming silently
Screaming silently!
Screaming silently...
Pissedoff-ness pausing politeness
Haulting hospitality, hoovering hostility.. hovering hostility
Apathetic, anti-apologetic, anti-"allgood"
If
I
May
Now
Take
A
Deep
Breath


*exhale*
Pungent puns piercing, praising ponders
Wanty wanty nah getty getty, wanty wanty wanders
No turning back, no turning back
Postulating.. Predicting patterns, perceiving possibilities.. Paraphrased purpose
NO! I was NOT read my rights before you handcuffed my development!
Paraphrased pardons
No longer begged, rather demanded
Development rebelling after being reprimanded
OH! Well IIIIII never!
I
Pardon
Your
Paralysis!
It brews and brews...
Satire seaping
Through a heart that is wearily weeping
Albeit, the finders are still finding
While the losers are still weeping. What is the sake of keeping?
Uninhibited frustration spraying, sparing nothing..
Stabbing and stabbing!
Oh.. Oh no.
Stumble, stumble, stumble
Falling over full fledged flooded conscience
No balance, divisions of conscience colliding, dividing
Decency and deceit, diverting differences
Smothering specifics
Mocking melancholy
Sliming on symmetry
SMACK! You smitened SMOOTCH!
Ohhhh, it aches, it aches.
Still,
The labor pains overshadowed by the birth I gave to the beauty of abstract...
The abstract that you can neither define nor decline
Your conscious laughs at your subconsious
And its strength is forced to submit to the sublime
In the abundance of that which is abstract, I subtract
All that you think you know and fill you in on that which even I have yet to define
Behold, the coexistence between the power and powerlessness of the human mind..

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