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Watastar
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Post Number: 59
Registered: 07-2004

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Posted on Tuesday, September 06, 2005 - 05:12 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

(This one, like most of the stuff I post, was pretty much freestyled as I went along. Nothing has been edited/corrected...)

Untitled Piece for Those in the Water

9/11
Twin towers falling
Officials calling
By 9/12, help was there and much more settled
Oh my bad, that was actually by 9/11
But now, nothing is even anywhere close to being settled
It's as if America said "We don't meddle"
at least when it comes down to helping third world countries
like Black America
Bet if it were Texas, we would not be seeing what we are seeing
Bet if it were Washington, D.C. we would not be seeing what we are seeing
Those in the water
have literally
had
it
up
to
HERE
But who does not feel simply does not know
Moreover, who does not care
does not care to know


Can you picture this?
Can you picture this?
Can you picture this?
Babies crying
Elders dying
in the meantime
you holdin on for your life
and seeing others lose theirs

Dead bodies
being eaten by rats
and you can't do nothin' else but hold on for your life... and look at that
But picture this
what if those dead bodies were those of your sister, your mother
It's REAL easy to x out the situations of the "others"
Mothers floating in one direction
Babies floating in the other
Husbands torn away from their wives
Sisters torn away from their brothers
Fathers in total disarray, nearly died trying to save their family's life
but still could not... and there ain't much more energy left to fight
Floating around in the same water with dead corpses, rats, sewage
and just about anything else
No food
no water
no family in many cases
can you feel the pain in your soul?
it is a pain that is in Diasporan bones, this pain is so old
Gives me flashes of our passage when I think of our people floating around
Can you imagine the pain of a mother whose infant drowned?
Can you imagine the pain of a father who is the only survivor of his fam?
A whole lotta nieces and nephews are looking for their estranged uncle, Sam
Now the people get to see who couldn't care less
Can you imagine already having hypertension and being under THIS stress?
Can you imagine the pain of a child who cannot find Daddy or Mommy?
Can you imagine the nerve of a president who flew right over all the sufferation yet played Great Benefactor with the Tsunami


Fire burnin
Fire burnin
Things are out of control
Chaos
Confusion
Elders dying
Babies crying
Elders and babies ALIKE are dying
And many in between, too
Displaced loved ones
And they talk about lootin... and they talk about lootin'.
These are the same ones that were hollering and hootin'
when the "terrorists" came to "their" country
But Lawd GAWD, let disaster strike a state
It will not matter if they do not live there
And they talk about,"Why didn't they just leave"?
Some simply did not have the means
Some simply did not want to leave
And they fault the ones who did not want to leave
Still, it would be very interesting to note
how many of the ones insincerely asking "Why didn't they just leave?"
would abandon all that they have worked towards and for
for most or all (in many cases) of their lives
to go to an unknown place
possibly with unknown people
even if they are... family
How many would do that, right here.. right now?
Understand, when asking, also
that the answer you are likely to get now, in the absence of desparation
is not likely the answer you will get later, in the presence of desparation

The people wanna know why
The people wanna know why
the president ain't talkin' fast enough
hell
he ain't hardly talkin' at ALL
Look like he strugglin to remember what he was told in his briefing
The people wanna know why
The people wanna know why
the president ain't talkin' fast enough
and neither is the preacher... or god... or the gods... or science... or congress
The people wanna know why
Do not be so quick to promise that you would not want to know why
Not until you have gone without
in such conditions
such horrific
mental
physical
emotional
spiritual
conditions...
Do not be so quick to promise that you would not want to know why, too.

Can you picture this?
Can you picture this?
Can you picture this?
Babies crying
Elders dying
in the meantime
you holdin on for your life
and seeing others lose theirs
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Watastar
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Posted on Thursday, September 08, 2005 - 09:32 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

"Who Can Heat the Sun?" Watastar (freestyle)

Who can heat the sun?
Who can wet water?
Who can make birds fly?
Or a duck quack?
Who can politicize the political?
Tell us who can politicize the political?

If it looks like a duck
walks like a duck
quacks like a duck
should the people be penalized
for calling it a duck?
the people did not make the duck a duck
the duck is, whether or not the people call it a duck or not
the duck is

The suffering
the poor conditions
the toxic waters in which many of them were forced to wade
the media bias
the skin color of those we see
I'm connecting
I'm connecting
I'm connecting
"THE DEMOCRATS WANT TO POLITICIZE THE ISSUE!" you rhetort
Mind you
I am neither democrat
Nor Republican
Nor any other less seen side of your one coin
So now it's
"BLACK PEOPLE WANT TO POLITICIZE THE ISSUE!"
Well in that case, mind you
We did not heat the sun
We did not make water wet
We did not make birds fly
Or ducks quack


And so
just as
we did not heat the sun
or make water wet
or make birds fly
or ducks quack
Though we (speaking of ducks) saw a duck, saw it walk, heard it quack
and called it a duck
We did not make it a duck

And so
just as
we did not
heat the sun
or make water wet
or make birds fly
or ducks quack
We
did not
politicize
the
political
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Mshoneybrown
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Post Number: 2
Registered: 09-2005

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Posted on Friday, September 16, 2005 - 12:11 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Wow. You captured my feelings better than I did.

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