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Author Message   ssmoothe2003 Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) Posted on Tuesday, December 23, 2003 - 08:59 am:        Blank faces staring suffering in silence Searching for something they left behind Women in pain, Women, no men Questioning the why's of how this came to be We, in this place and time Bad relations, lost love..2 much, 2 fast, 2 soon Who knows, who cares You don't care, whether to be born of love or lust Just to be Gods creation Gone in 2 minutes "2 minutes", the doc says 2 minutes to make 2 miutes to take....in a vacuum (the grinding sound is making me sick, I want to run, but I can't) so I stand by your side, holding your hand trying to understand Blank faces staring, suffering in silence searching for something they left behind 2 minutes, 2 lives, transcend time 2 minutes for the rest of your life   Sis. Shiree Sarana Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) Posted on Monday, December 29, 2003 - 06:47 pm:        Greetings ssmoothe2003, I felt all the pain in the piece. If it's intent is for us to reflect, stop, rewind and choose another path I'm feelin' that! Peace & Blessings Your Sister In The Word Sis. Shiree Sarana   Beautifulwaterstar Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) Posted on Monday, December 29, 2003 - 11:17 pm:        Hey, Ssmoothe. Dang, sounds like a hard thing to go through even 'if' you weren't exactly the one going through it the most. :-(   ssmoothe2003 Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) Posted on Tuesday, December 30, 2003 - 08:32 am:        Thanks to Sis Shiree Sarana and Beautifulwaterstar.... Being strong ain't all it's cranked up to be...everything in that place affected me. That's why i had to write it down and this is only my first draft. It was meant to convey the pain, both emotional and physical.