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     J Rating: N/A |
if Thier eyes (rusty "closed" signs swinging in the vast pericardium wasteland) were watching God no wonder them rose-colored glasses painted a paled version of the truth where were Their minds vacationing when teachers (the very mirror image of Them, their gods) s-l-a-v-e-d over the GEEographyof Our (my bad) the 'jography of Their world a question is but a statement until the one who seeks its answer realizes the truth (like the proof that hides within the pudding) is buried in the lyes | ||
| themba Rating: N/A |
Word power mis-bused Word misused razer sharp spear like most likely abused ,hit like sledge hammer baby fore-head smash crush interfere with ego wrongly accused no excuse Word misused razer sharp spear like pierce heart blood ooze pride squizze ,ego crush bruzed character hate invoked evil welcome heart-jaw broken thanx to a smack inflicated by lies frastration anger transformed brain-function trancated bad-emotions transcend phone picked razer sharp spear like words shot ego bruzed sorries facked hate raised Satan praised God sad copyright (themba vilakazi) 2003 | ||
| Lambd Rating: N/A |
You got a way with words. Really forces the reader to think about the message. Thank you. This is quite inspirational. It kind of got me in the mood to write something. | ||
| Beautifulwaterstar Rating: N/A |
I'm really diggin' it as usual, you two. "Freestyling about God and the Devil and stuff" What I don't understand Is how can people say Man Is evil and then turn around and say That everything God created was good. Um, okay So did Evil come before God? Okay. I sort of lied when I said I don't understand But it was kinda sorta poetic and stuff, Man lol The truth is I innerstand it very well It is the anatomy of human thought, Created and inflated by Man I'm just freestyling, so if you see a lot of tangents Please just try to understand it' Just be 'da way I be sometimes Typing as the thoughts rhyme from my mind To the computer screen Anyway, I mean What's good without evil? What's health without illness? You would not know one without the other, U feel this? Why everybody be beatin' up on 'da devil When God supposedly created everything that exists in the first place? Why fault the middle dude and let the other save face? Okay really, really, really I promise I'm not an evil chick With spiritual pitch forks, Trying to get anyone to stop believing in what they hold sacred and stuff but even so Some things, many things are just beyond illogical And most people not reasoning more about certain things are just way too intelligent to act so Why The Devil made you act ugly at work? Why The Devil made yo' husband flirt? Why The Devil made you act a fool on Maple Street? Why you say The Devil is who made Sista Johnson's daughter turn into a bigtime freak? Okay I guess the better question is.. Why do you give some dude who is soooooooo bery bery ebil SO much control over your life? Besides according to your belief about God creating all that exists, it would mean He/She created The Devil, right? Why was The Devil created in the first place? No, really, just think about it for a minute If the devil is so bad And God controls everything that goes on, Why is the big, bad devil even around? If it is to punish the wicked, Who created the wicked? If the wicked are soooo wicked, Why are they even around? Alright. I guess what I "really" want to say Is the next time you eat all that chocolate cake and gain all that weight, be man or woman enough to admit that YOU are the reason it happened and not the debil, mmkayyyyy? lol (Why do I get the feeling that someone is over there telling me that I am going to Hell? lol) | ||
| themba Rating: N/A |
Lambd! who r u referin 2? What did u write from ur inspiration |
