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Lambd

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Posted on Monday, October 20, 2003 - 10:56 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

My reality is not your reality, so why judge me based on your beliefs.
We can only judge ourselves based on what our reality is for us.
The man in the mirror isn't really there.
He's only a reflection of our own image.
What does that make my neighbor?
Is he a reflection of something all together different? Or is he a reflection of our own image taken from a different angle?
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Beautifulwaterstar

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Posted on Monday, October 20, 2003 - 12:39 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Oh my WORD! Lambd, don't take this the wrong way (please don't) but I just had a verbal or-... NAH, never mind.. ( you would probably terribly misunderstand and with good reason.lol) Put it like this.. I LOVED that.. Ooh, it just made me quiver in verbal ecstasy..

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Cynique

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Posted on Monday, October 20, 2003 - 02:12 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

LMD: You and Beautifulwaterstar are really striking a note in me with your excursions into the concept of reality. It's hard to convert the abstract into the imagery of verse, but but you 2 have managed to do so quite effectively.
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Beautifulwaterstar

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Posted on Monday, October 20, 2003 - 04:08 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

She gave me a curious glance here and there
And then downright started to stare
And as she does,
Something goes through my psyche
Like a bolt of lightning.. Exciting?
Not really.. A bit frightening
Because I she just will not stop staring..
"Hey what the heck is it with you?
You are piercing the core of my being
With your eyes
Why why are you looking all surprise?
STOP IT! STOP LOOKING AT ME!
ARRRRGGHHH! STOP IT! YOU STOP IT!
YOU MISERABLE WRETCH!!"
I stretched
My arm to strike at her
And the most frightening matter
Is that when I did, she did not move
She just got lost in the glass that was shattered

(Just a freestyle inspired by Lambrid's "man in the mirror" reference. ;))

Cynique, nuttin' but luv for ya, Sis.. I'mma say it in the next post, too. :-)

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