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N'rituall

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Posted on Tuesday, June 24, 2003 - 10:43 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Damn Girl,

I am so whipped by you
{cream}
that I smoke
your words like
the last bit of rock
that I found in the
cracks of my
s/o/u/l/.

My pipe holds the residue,
(cough)
of what I see in you,
and your smoke puts my
world on
h/o/l/d/.
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Cynique

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Posted on Wednesday, June 25, 2003 - 02:13 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Damn, N'rituall, that's a cool poem. What woman wouldn't love to be rhapsodized in such pungent imagery.
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ABM

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Posted on Wednesday, June 25, 2003 - 02:26 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

That is tight, N'rituall. I gottah give you your propers on that 1, playa. I betchu pull a lottah artsy chicks with that kinda dealin'. Don'tcha?

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