| Author | Message | ||
     Kathleen_cross Newbie Poster Username: Kathleen_cross Post Number: 13 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: |
For Us, By Us kneel beside her now this brown sister sweat drenched work weary perpetually underfed taste a drop of her sorrow this Creator's child leg shackled to desperation freedom be her dread ache to lift her burden workhorse woman baby tied to bowed back with rags from massa's wife scream out justice for this soul survivor hands weary scarred and wageless clinging to so-called life we could end her slavery invisible daughter piece-worker anonymous sweatshop whore call her name, haiti dominca, mexico she be nafta's slave serving two gods hers, and, yes, brother, yours condemn her masters karan, levi, brooks brothers and, sadly, your own f.u.b.u hey, brother she's your sister, your mother hey brother nice suit | ||
| Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall Post Number: 45 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Hot damn!!! We have a winna!!! Kathleen you had me through the whole joint. Nice twist on that ending. Loving you to do more...much more. And thank you so much for not forcing NO rhymes. I applaud you sister and I am throughing away my FUBU. | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 607 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I aint throwing away my FUBU. Still I like your rythm...I may be crazy, but I like your rythm and your rhyme. Be it forced or otherwise, your rhyme was strong, and I felt it. Mas! Mucho mas! | ||
| Cuba_va Newbie Poster Username: Cuba_va Post Number: 7 Registered: 10-2004 Rating: N/A |
Lovely. I'm feelin that transition and your contrast and comparison. Word play, unforgettable. Please feed us more. |
