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Moonsigns
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Posted on Thursday, August 19, 2004 - 02:22 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

THE FORGOTTEN DIVINE

In this space of sacredness
I've seen your tender smile in the faceless names
Gently, like the majestic sunrise pushing through the diamond filled sky
Time and intuition beckoned me to speak of love
My heart opened wide to the whispers and shouts of your forgotten divine
During the shadow of the seasons last, full moon
The earth wept to me and spilled it's bleeding heart
Earnestly, my soul danced to a pulsating rhythm that will never be my own
What shall I take in my arms but these broken dreams and painful lullabies?
I will always remember the song of your forgotten divine, the song of those you infinitely love
The turbulent waves of their glory will forever tread on the deep ocean of my mind
As my seared conscience can't forget the melody of their sorrow and strength
My purpose has come and gone with the summers wind
The cool, east autumn air is waiting patiently
The new moon is rising and my journey isn't over
May your forgotten divine discover the peace and gratitude that was in my hello and goodbye
Quietly, like the violet dusk melting over the sleepy, copper sun
Time and intuition beckon me to keep still
Farewell
Farewell

Peace, Love, Respect Grace, Faith, Health and Wisdom to ALL!

-Moonsigns :-)

*I copyright all my work*




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Lambd
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Posted on Thursday, August 19, 2004 - 02:48 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Moonie, great poem, seriously. I thoroughly enjoyed it...honestly. Except you put a little something extra at the end that's going to cause you some trouble.

*I copyright all my work*

I can hear their footsteps.
They are preparing to pounce.
These cats will spill your blood,
And drink every ounce.
Your words of Peace, Love and Grace,
Won't protect you when they roam.
That last line sounds like,
"These stupid niggas might steal my poem!"

Moonie, Moonie, can't catch a break...nice poem, though. You see, Moonmaiden, if you gonna post here, you gotta think like black folks. Always thinking that "Whitey tryna get us!", "What the hell Whitey mean by that?", You a white girl on the AALBC. Its a little different than being a black girl on a white site. We go on there, already paranoid. We come on here and still paranoid. Just in case 'Whitey' come up in here, we already know we gotta watch him. Cuz he sho' watchin' us.
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Cynique
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Posted on Thursday, August 19, 2004 - 03:02 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Bye, Moonie. May all of your beams be good ones.
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Moonsigns
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Posted on Thursday, August 19, 2004 - 03:05 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Oh, oh 'lil Lambd. You sweet thang, you took a break from your azz whupping to come chat to the white gurl. I guess you grew bigger ones overnight *lol* how impressive!

People who have a poets soul understand perfectly that work is sacred. The stuff about copyright isn't for anyone here, but for those hundreds of people who hit this site up daily who aren't poets and don't respect a poets work.


Now Lambd, get your hand out the cookie jar before your momma gets home --you know you will surely be slapped if you don't control your hunger for moon pies!

Much love 'lil lambd,lambd and be a good boy for your mommy :-)





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Moonsigns
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Posted on Thursday, August 19, 2004 - 03:07 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Cynique,

I will miss you the most :-) Maybe I'll stop in to say hi sometime!

Much love
:-)
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Lambd
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Posted on Thursday, August 19, 2004 - 03:33 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Mmmmmmmm!.....Moonpies!
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Carey
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 01:56 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

See, that's what I'm talking about! Couldn't leave without pimp slappin' a brotha .....and he laughed!...uuummm.
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Abm
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 02:30 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Moonsigns,

That is quite a poetic bon voyage.

BTW: According to US Copyright Law, a poem is copyright protected the moment it is written. So as long as you can prove you wrote it first (e.g., it has been published/distributed), the law will cover your work. Registration with the Library of Congress, though advisable, is not legally necessary.


Carey,

I guess when a Moon comes offering her pie, a brothah like Lambd is apt to comply (Hey! Yawl see that rhyme?).

I'm sure A_womon is 'thrilled' by that.


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Moonsigns
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 04:17 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Abm,

I only bake moonpies for one man, but I will make fun of men who try to deny their sweet tooth. Sugar is sugar --and everyone loves sugar!

:-)
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Abm
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 04:35 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

At times I dig my sugar white.
Though most times I take it brown.
But it all kinda taste aiight
When a brothah's goin’ down.
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Lambd
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 04:39 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

That damn Moonsigns still in here? Gurl, I dun gave that round azz moon a chance to git and she still up in hurr! Now git gurl! Fore I hafta take dis here thing to ya hide!...You probably like that, don't you Moonie? If I take you over my knee? Yeah. You been a bad, bad, lunar ladie, aint ya? Heheheh! Gurl, I dun tole you once, I dun tole you a thousand times, stay away from that dude. Talkin' bout Moonpies and sugar and all. You won't have to go out in the sun for that hide to get tanned in a minute. Think I'm playin' if ya want.
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Lambd
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 04:42 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Abm, you gonna catch it for that little diddy there. Aint you got no shame? Where is A_woman? Did you hear what this 'Black' man just said to this white woman? DISGUSTIN'!!!!
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Carey
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 04:42 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

She's Jazzy too I see. Oh well, tough t(*&y but somebody gotta .......

I just bought a new car for my son and I have to do all the stuff that goes along with that and I don't have time today to get down with y'all so bye for today......or at least for now. Mr. Charlie said I have to be at his beckon call at 5pm until 7am, and you know what.....I'll be there! Yep, I have to be able to put some chickens on the table so I'll be there. I'm blessed to have a means to support my pleasures. This here cable bill is $60.00 and that's nothing to snez at. Some might have it like that but not me. I could go for that free slower means on the net but it doesn't fit my frantic mind. I need mine NOW. And sometimes this cable hookup ain't fast enough, it you know what I mean. Anyway, I'm gone, love ya all .......well most :-).

btw, my girl Kathleen Cross has a new book out and I can't wait to talk with her about it. I've heard through the grape vine that's it's a doozzy!
Let me see where my form letter is on begging for books. Oh here it is, "Dear (fill in authors name), I love your work and could you.........:-)

Bye Y'all

Carey

Carey
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Moonsigns
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 05:03 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

'lil lamb

D.C. men are a TRIP --I have to stay in the suburbs! I'll stop in to say 'hi' the next full moon --gotta go for real --I'm leav'in, I'm leav'in --I see your momma com'in with the belt this time --
It's been fun and you are so crazy!!!! I'll miss you Lambchop :-)


-moonie

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Abm
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 05:17 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Carey,

Dang! We gon' sho' miss yah, Pops. Hope you drop in check on us now and then.

Oh. And I hope dat boy of yours don't tear up dat car before you done paying fur it. :-)


Lambd

Dangit! Didn't I tell you to stop messin' with those lil' fast tail White gurls. You keep on and somebody gon' string yah up!


Moonsigns says: "...gotta go for real --I'm leav'in, I'm leav'in --"
ABM says: Lambd. Isn't it funny how all chicks say the same stuff as you trynah kick'em outtah yah house.
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A_womon
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 06:04 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

I'd rather be considered lambd's mommie than his HO-ly girl anyday!! Haha! NOW how bout that? Tee hee!
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A_womon
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Posted on Friday, August 20, 2004 - 06:09 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Oh lil lamb (aint that so... so...so... white?) are you the one that Mary had? or lost or some ish????haha!

Holla atcha girl!!
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Watastar
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Posted on Saturday, August 21, 2004 - 09:30 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Oh now that was just BEAUTIFUL, Moonsigns. But dang, why are you leaving? Do I need to read all these posts fully or something, but is CAREY trying to go somewhere, too? :-( *Wata thinks to herself* "Why does everyone leave just when I come back?" (Curse mi madda did tell mi seh I curse no heck! JUST CURSED! *has temper tantrum in the safety of her solitude*)

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