| Author | Message | ||
     Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 262 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Aint fittin to stop til a quarter past one. I'm just startin' to have my fun. Twinkle, twinkle, Watastar. What a star I think you are. You make me moan with such delite. Should I lick you or should I bite? If I bite will you turn red? Will you try to leave my bed? Will your blood rush to your head? Try to breathe or loose your head. You supposed to be tough, aint that yo' cred'? I won't stop until I'm done. I'll keep pumpin' till it aint no fun. Stop your pleadin' and pushin' away. You ready to stop and I'm ready to stay. You still runnin' and your thighs is all wet! I'm still pumpin and aint came yet. It's half past ten and I aint done. I aint fittin to stop til' a quarter past one | ||
| Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall Post Number: 28 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Is it just me or should I delete this? Cast your votes... | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 909 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I think Lambd was responding to the erotic poem by watastar that appeared in another post. ("Feels So Good.") As for voting to delete his poem, I say - let it stay. We don't want him to go on hiatus again. | ||
| A_womon "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: A_womon Post Number: 374 Registered: 05-2004 Rating: N/A |
There's only 2 lines that could be offensive to some, but dang!!! Do we always hafta be squeaky clean around here? Can't artistic expression be allowed to run free just a little around here? Let it stay.... | ||
| Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall Post Number: 29 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
From two magnificent women that I respect to no end, I hear ya!!!! We do not have to be squeeky clean around here. In fact I have caught a lot of slack off board about the direction I am allowing the board to go. Sexy poems, erotic poems, or just plain ole' wild out poems seem to rub some of our readers(who would shall remain nameless) the wrong way. I am the one for artistic freedom, but it will be your voice that counts when it comes to the discussion boards. The poem "Fo' Watastar: A Quota Pass" stays...and anyone with an issue with it please email me and express your point of view. (again!) (...just kidding) Thanks for speaking up ladies, would not want to do it without ya. | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 914 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Hopefully, a word to the wise is sufficent, Rondall, and the "offenders" will tone down their future poems. | ||
| A_womon "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: A_womon Post Number: 376 Registered: 05-2004 Rating: N/A |
No thank you for taking a stand!!!  Love ya!! | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 264 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I didn't think it was that bad. I could have done alot worse. I vote to delete it. I wouldn't want to offend anyone. If it offends even one person Rondall, get rid of it. I appreciate Awoman and Cynique's opinion as much as the next, however, (and you knew there would be a 'however') if I could delete it, I would. If you don't mind, do me the justice of doing it for me. The direction the site is going in? Sheesh!!! Please delete it before I am sick to my stomach. Some of these people have got to get out more. I realize that anything remotely erotic is offensive to the few prudes that reside here, but some of you are getting ridiculous. Rondall, if you do not delete this poem I vow to hound you about it until the day I drop dead. Is it just me? Obviously its not just you so get rid of the wretched thing!!!!!!! Why isn't there a way for us to delete our own posts anyway? For God's sake, burn that abomination! BURN IT! Cast it into the firey furnace! Erase it from memory! Tear it up! And at the same time drive a stake through my heart, you communist sympathizers!!!!!!! Where are the archives? They are filled with erotic poetry that would make my short post look like a nursery rhyme! Have we evolved to the point that nothing is sacred? Or have we evolved to a point where everything is sacred and the "GUARDIANS OF COMMON DECENCY" have self-righteously drawn the guidelines by which we live? I think you people are giving me way too much credit. But if I were to think that one of my poems offended even one person on this board, which I cherish with all of my wounded soul, I would die right where I sit. So, Rondall,...delete at will. | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 265 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Forgive my rantings. After reading my poem again, (sober), it is way over the top. Please delete it. I have offended myself as well. I hope my sincere shame is observed by my cohorts and my apologies are accepted. I stand tamed and ashamed. Served with a nice portion of crow. Put down and counted out. I need to relieve myself of the guttural poetry that lies constipated in the depths of my bowels! Please take this horrid pill from me and draw me into the bossom of your high fallutin' faith. | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 266 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
As you can see, the fact that the poem has offended people is really bothering me, so please, please, please delete it! | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 267 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Rondall, I am really ashamed. And now I am even more ashamed that I have been ranting for the last twenty minutes. Can I get some justice around here? Put me out of my misery, PULLEEEZE! | ||
| A_womon "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: A_womon Post Number: 377 Registered: 05-2004 Rating: N/A |
Lambd, What's wrong witcha dude? Rondall was saying its all good and we shouldn't have to be squeaky clean around every blanking moment of every blanking day!! Everyone knows that clean is boring!!!!!! Ya need to throw in a little spice once in a while to liven things up!!! I've said it before and I'll say it again...I love your poetry man! The only small criticism that I have is nooooooo...never mind | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 918 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Off your meds again, Lambd? Chill out, babe. It's Thumper's board, and he has the right to expect Rondall to exercise discretion. This is not a public forum. | ||
| Rondall Moderator Username: Rondall Post Number: 30 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Lambd, you've got some issues that are beyond even me, but that first ranting CRACKED ME UP!!! Keep writing man!! You are sumtin' speshul. Peace | ||
| Watastar Newbie Poster Username: Watastar Post Number: 8 Registered: 07-2004 Rating: N/A |
Fo' Lambd "Anticipation" Watastar (For Lambd) All day and all night, I wait for you I toss and turn As my body yearns For the satisfaction only you can give... Oh every second that I live Without you is way too much I want you now, I can even taste you in my soul and such a feeling of total ecstasy comes over me when you are next to me on that nightstand I reach for you You are there I do not want to share you with ANYONE, NO.. You are all mine **Ring** **Ring** Wait. What's that? OH DEAR, OH DEAR! YOU ARE COMING! Well what did you THINK I was talking about? You are such perverts.. My PIZZA is here! :-) Ah lubz you, Lambd. You help to keep my creativity flowing. | ||
| Abm "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Abm Post Number: 612 Registered: 04-2004 Rating: N/A |
Lambd/Watastar, You 2 are quite the complementary pair. You 2 should try to go on a spoken-word tour together. Although, after reading your (rather symbiotic) poems, I cannot help feeling like a "Peeping Tom". HAHAHA! | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 268 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Ah lubz you too, Watastar. I always wil. I don't even mind if they think our love is durty. You got a mean flow and I want you to continue to let it flow all over me. I don't even mind that slimy Abm watchin' us flow all over each other. Rondall, I'm glad you found the comedy in the rantings, and yes I do have issues. I realize that sum folk get me and sum folks don't. The folks that don't aint dumb. They just really, really sssssloooowwwwwww. A_woman, you should know by now that I will never stop writing. I may get a cork shoved up in the hole that my creativity secretes from once in awhile, but now that that Beautifulwaterstar is resurfaced, I know I'll have plenty to feed from. C-neek, my freak, you are my muse. You fertilize the poetree that bears sweet fruit. Once in awhile I'll give you a squeeze when I need a glass of sweet C-neek-ade. Ooooh, baby. I can taste it...and it tastes sooooo good. | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 934 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
I love your resilience, Lambd. 'Glad I'm still in your loop. | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 272 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
If you were a needle, I would want to be a spool of thread. Then I could catch your eye. |
