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     Watastar Newbie Poster Username: Watastar Post Number: 2 Registered: 07-2004 Rating: N/A |
Feels So Good" ("You're So Amazing")Watastar 2003 I am here with you and you are here with me.. My goodness This is just.. Just.. Just beautiful. When I look at you, I really can't help but stare Because you are just so amazing and your energy is everywhere. Oh.. And did I tell you how much you amaze me? I long to feel you, So I reach out to you and oh do you take me This is no mistake, see.. We are here to complement each other.. And so it is done.. Now let us become one. No.. We "are" one.. So let us simply express our oneness Ommm.. I take you in And yes I must admit, I am sooo impressed No. I am more or less.. Entranced.. As our spirits dance To the rhythms of Ur, You hit a spot in my soul and my subconscious begins to slur.. My double emerges from the depths of all that I am And if I didn't expect all things in advance, I quite honestly would believe none of what I am feeling, What I am seeing. Yes, yes! Take me, take me! Make me Remember why I even chose to come here You make my toes spiral as U breathe Truth into my ear.. Oh wait. I see my reflection in your eyes And the very realization pierces Through the core of my existence like a knife.. Before, they were merely words, But now, I really innerstand how it feels to be given "The Kiss of Life".. Yes.. You gave me the kiss of life and I cherish that Around you, within me is where it's at Oh hold up. Didn't I just do that object of the preposition thing? Nah. You ain't even sweatin' that, and you tell me The truth is that within me, perfect are all things.. Aww. You so sweet. U kiss my crown and even inspire the soles of my feet I am so glad I know you And that is why noone can arrest this Asomatous development Our oneness is an autonomous settlement And never are you found guilty of embezzlement.. If anything, you give so unselfishly You give all that you've got And you've got "infinity" The beauty of this arrangement, birthed in balance Is quite literally "symmetry" Wow.. All this inspired by 15 minutes of sitting down with you Thank you so much. I love and adore you, Nature. U're beautiful and never will I lose touch. Written a while back when I went to the river.. Nature does a spirit good... | ||
| Abm "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Abm Post Number: 577 Registered: 04-2004 Rating: N/A |
The ‘Nice’ ABM Review: Watastar, Your verse is so potently alive and free that it leaves me…breathless. Welcome back, my young 'Fire Maiden'...Welcome Back! | ||
| Abm "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Abm Post Number: 578 Registered: 04-2004 Rating: N/A |
The ‘Naughty’ ABM Review: Everybody, Eh...I don’t know about the rest of you, but after seeing how Watastar breaks it down, I’ve got go get ‘laid’. Hehe! | ||
| Cynique "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Cynique Post Number: 901 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
You're in fine form, Watastar. | ||
| Lambd "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Lambd Post Number: 263 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Wattup, Wata? | ||
| A_womon "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: A_womon Post Number: 371 Registered: 05-2004 Rating: N/A |
Yes, I was wondering why you disappeared! Your works are nothing short of magnifique!!!! I too am glad you're back. | ||
| Watastar Newbie Poster Username: Watastar Post Number: 6 Registered: 07-2004 Rating: N/A |
ahahahahaha @ABM! Youse a NUT, you hear me!? hahahaha Well dig it, you know the poem was about Nature, right? Everything in there is about the river, the trees, the wind, the sun, etc. I just looked around and said,"Wow, this is absolutely beautiful!" I sincerely love being outside, it really helps one to stay intune with that which is on the "inside". Thankyou, Cynique! Where's YOUR poetry? Please share. :-) LAMBD! HI, YOU! How have you BEEN!? I missed you! A-womon, thank you so much. Well I didn't really disappear. I wasn't, for whatever reasons, able to register for the longest, but the other day, I just felt to come to the site and try again. Glad I did, I'm loving the vibes as usual... | ||
| Abm "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Abm Post Number: 613 Registered: 04-2004 Rating: N/A |
Watastar, You are such a poetic 'tease' that you mustah drove the neighborhood boys CRAZY.  | ||
| Yukio "Cyniquian" Level Poster Username: Yukio Post Number: 623 Registered: 01-2004 Rating: N/A |
Our Water You said I have steps in my hair when water falls on it, curls flattening into squares like rice paddies cut into mountains We could have been in a waterfall, at the sacred site of Saute-D'eau, encircled by an impromptu ceremony of birds. Instead, in Boston's November, we take what we can: flights of laughter, and only a bar of soap between us. Danielle Legros Georges | ||
| Watastar Newbie Poster Username: Watastar Post Number: 23 Registered: 07-2004 Rating: N/A |
Hiiiiiiiiiiiii, Yukio! I loved that. It kinda reminds me of Outkast's Taalatisha interlude though. (hmmmm.lol) |
