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Rising_star
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Username: Rising_star

Post Number: 2
Registered: 06-2004

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Posted on Thursday, June 17, 2004 - 03:46 pm:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

i never put it together
and i dont think i tried
but now my life has changed forever
and tonight i cried,
played the game
but now it doesn't feel the same
because now i remember faces not just names,
maybe just maybe this is what i deserve
still i ask for forgivness when i get up the nerve,
its no fun being alone asking god why me?
so now i have a new respect for love and sensitivity,
stars in the sky represent tears i have caused
and i swear in the distance between my sobs i hear applause,
its cold and its raining,yet the stars have never been so bright
still the woman i love lied and cheated and i dont think its right!

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Lambd
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Username: Lambd

Post Number: 153
Registered: 01-2004

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Posted on Friday, June 18, 2004 - 06:59 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

Dayyum!!!!!!!!
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Rising_star
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Post Number: 5
Registered: 06-2004

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Posted on Friday, June 18, 2004 - 09:18 am:   Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Ban Poster IP (Moderator/Admin only)

thanks lambid!!!!thanks!!!!i was looking for a site such as this!!!i have plenty and some i am working on..i do expect some negativeness as well...i plan on writting alot and some day being published all are copywritten and some on poetry.com but not so sure about them!!!stay tuned!!!!thanks for the compliment and look foward reading your work your work....lol!!!!

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